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[Letter (Boundless Ocean)]

Beautiful.

Beautiful, simply beautiful, i loved the clarity. you did a really good job on this one.

Setu-Firestorm responds:

Thank you. I hated that I had to compress it to a lower bitrate just to post it here, but if you want, there's a high-quality version downloadable on my iSound profile at:

http://www.isound.com/other_side_of_yesterday

Thanks for the review.

[Our Secret]

Good.. very good

Finish this song its sounding good. Just a few things... first is, clear up the strumming a bit, make it smoother so that you can hear the pick on it less. add some background to it as well, perpaps a drum or some such. a few instruments would be even better.
Oh yes and make the ryhthm more smooth, its a bit jerky right now.
but overall apart from these things the song isnt bad.

plang responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Liberi Lunerum]

Beautiful

Very, Very impressive for an orchestrated piece. All the pieces come out clearly and... YES!!! Finally someone who understands the concept of weaving and blending your music to make a beautiful whole! top marks mate. perhaps few vocals if you can put them in... by that i mean solos not choirs. That would make it sound perfect.

SuperTonic64 responds:

Thanks Krayon! :D

I believe that the ensemble should work together, not separately, to create music. I'm glad you've taken notice to this. :)

Anywho, I have a nice boy/ahh choir that could work nicely, but the problem is...I lost all my files on my old computer, and this is one of them. :P So I will rewrite the entire thing and extend it, too. :D

Thanks for the review! ^_^
~Smartpoetic

[Torrential Uprising - Loop]

not bad but....

hmmm this is hard to place. its very repetitive although i like the 'vocals' if you can call them that. Don't try to synthesise vocals unless you can make them realistic. Get real life recording if you can. Very broad feeling in general but you can have made it more clear with some more indtruments, heavy drums and strong echoes are very good for the feeling. A little less continuous as well. If you did a strong expplosive echo and then the vocals all together it would go well.
still its not bad though although not your best =)

Winterwind-NS responds:

Haha well, shows how much u know.
not to be too rude but the 'vocals' isnt synthesised. That choir/orchestra recording was a sample from an immediate music composition.
Rocky and I did our best, since the Mac isnt over till the end of April (which i didnt know...) We're defintely gonna edit this.
Our first time at DrumNBass :)

thanks for the review

[For You..]

pretty good

this is pretty good i liked it. you could have added more instruments and taken out the synthesised stuff but otherwise its pretty good. a nice background tune that is relevant to the title.

Swift-Reason responds:

I was actually trying to decide what instrument to use for the melody but couldn't find anything i liked enough so I went with what you hear. I think it adds a certain element to the piece. Thanks for the review!

[_-={The Spread of Chaos}=]

very good feel

I liked the way you started off with the straight beat and then went into the melody, it was really good. a bit more diversity in the instruments and youll have a perfect song.

MaestroRage responds:

I will try to do that! Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it! I apologize for the very very late response! *It is April 10th... or 9th for this response to those who care :(*

[When the First Leaf Falls RXD]

Brilliant...

A great Piece, absolutely brillian. I loved it.

HouseMasta responds:

yay! glad you liked it!

[Confession (The Exiled)]

mate you sis well in everything but the guitars

Great begginning and song but youll need to get way better guitar recording cause that guitar was atrocious, no offense i loved the rest of the song and i understand it took a long time to make, do a remake with an improved guitar version try to get a real recording=)

Setu-Firestorm responds:

Trust me, this was a starting project. It was the first rock song I ever made. I'm getting better with it, honest. ^^;

With all the new ideas that flood into my mind, the chance of me redoing this one is unlikely.

Thanks for the review though.

[Epic Warfare]

good job

i think this was well made, especially the singing but i think you should take some tips from edgen as to epic action and battle sequences, he did a really good job.

XGM-Zeth responds:

Edgen own me; But sooner or later I shall catch him in.

Anyways; Thanks for reviewing.

[March of the damned]

excellent i loved it

a brilliant piece of music you do very well,not only was it refreshingly original but it also had great depth,the first thing i noticed was the way it kept building and then diminshed. keep up the good work.

XGM-Zeth responds:

Thanks! Always love reading reviews.
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